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Pulling down my pants,
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I sat on the toilet seat
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in my usual fashion.
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This morning was different—
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a small sticker
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stuck there on my thigh.
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Looking down at it,
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I smiled,
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remembering the little guy
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who put it there.
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“Something to ‘member me by,
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Momma”.
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Like I could ever forget you.
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17 Feb 05 |
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Sweet. I'm not sure about the opening three lines tho - 'usual fashion'? I have only figured out one way, but I am a routine kind of gal and when I find something that works I stick to it;) The sentiment is wonderful.
Sam
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yes it is. like drawing smiling faces on each others knees.
ps: 'lo sam. kiss.
— kaleidazcope
On this morning I really need that kiss, hun...back at ya. x
Sam
— unknown
First 3 lines.... VERY raw. I like it!
— aforbing
aforbing you are a perv
— unknown
That's one of the reasons I love aforbing.
Sam
— unknown
interesting juxtapostion of visuals and momma-thought: sitting on the toilet is very like a squat, a common birthing position in some countries
also, the idea of releasing something from inside -- well ... i'll stop there
good ... very good
— Bloodfetish
haha, cute.
i love the last line :)
— FrayedSkirt
theres something here that catches my interest, really alters my mood in a way im not quite familiar with. its interesting.
— MrFetus
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