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(LU) when i was looking forward
gnormal

when i was looking forward to t
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that tself was t
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there t was
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here i am
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3 Feb 05

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It's  subtle and sweet and has meaning
No more can be asked from such a miniaturization
nine points given  for an LU contest entry 12 word-or-less poem
I am netsky posting under interim account name frankensteen
because my real acount was rudely stolen away
 — frankensteen

horible
 — whiteraven

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