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brooksdevine

It's times like these where the only thing on your mind is nothing,
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It's a brilliant dazzaling contraption,
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masking the identity at hand.
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The way you feel when the feathers turn to rocks,
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your life shifts,
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quick,quick!
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it shifts without approval.
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Your suddenly a mess and theres no turning back,
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what you could have done differently now has no effect.
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you now come off as fake,
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hiding the truth,
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who am i today?
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and why am i different?
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but the answers dont come with ease.
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when everything is wrong,
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and nothing is light,
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it's times like these where even if your tempted,
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you won't give up this fight.
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26 Jan 05

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i love it, brilliantly worded, i like the effect of it. it's has a semi-hidden meaning, but you can figure it out, it's hot..
 — unknown

L2 dazzling
it is great...i love the meaning(multiplied by two)
good work
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