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Rull
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Caught in loneliness,
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trapped by oneness.
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Searching for something
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To end the emptiness.
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Weaken from the giving,
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wounded by the taking.
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Slipping in despair
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from walls of rejection.
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Haunted by fears,
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drowning in tears.
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Conversing with shadows
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to still the awareness.
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Giving up the phantom,
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the vision of two.
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Accepting the aloneness,
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The saneness for one.
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26 Aug 04 |
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the rhyming sounded very forced. i would opt for the free verse way, i think it would have better flow. i did like l13 though.
— sassybnyss
rite
— unknown
This piece is just one cliche after another.
— unknown
lines 5 n 6 are the only saving grace
last stanza could have been better.
rest all are cliched lines...
— trochee
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