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2 months 3 days
SaleenDriva

All happenin' so
 1
quick.
 2
2 months and 3 days into this
 3
and I want to
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marry
 5
be with
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only have
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you.
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Seems like so much
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longer
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than it's been.
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Can't remember
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not meeting you after class,
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not planning my life around you,
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not
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longing, wanting, needing
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to be with you all the time.
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Time is no representation of our
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love
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for one another.  None at all
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Cause' even if I had 2 months
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(and 3 days)
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to tell you how much you mean to me,
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I couldn't even come close.
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You make me whole,
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you fill me up, you are my
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everything.
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My girl.
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15 Nov 05

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hea hea/

i'm envious
of your verdant lolly pop
dream.

been there
before/

day couldn't go fast enough until i could see here again/

skippin class together/

/
 — fdostoev

2 months and 3 days?  Go ahead, and I predict 2 years and 3 months until the divorce.  This belongs in a private letter, slipped into her locker.
 — unknown

hey line 4"andi " is not a real word. and stop mentioning her naame make it easier for us all to emotionally access this poem.
 — lodza

fdostoev- Thanks...I try to stay outta trouble as much as I can, so skippin class may not be in the cards TO much ;)  
Unknown-Nah, I'm too young to marry at this point.  It WAS in a private latter sliped into her locker, but I put my poetry up here to improve it, so please...if you have something to say in reference to form, style, flow-anything, please feel free to comment.
Lodza-Took the name out, better now?  AND I edited the word I had made up ;)  thanks-I goota write your e-mail still.  SCHOOL IS KILLING ME!!  

Any other input is welcome, thanks a lot.
-BP
 — SaleenDriva

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