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re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  unknown  27 Mar 06 1:54PM Thread Closed

http://poetry.tetto.org/read/28104/

i'm in.

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  unknown  28 Mar 06 6:51AM Thread Closed

> i'm in.

So you are.  Nice entry.

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  unknown  28 Mar 06 11:49AM Thread Closed

http://poetry.tetto.org/read/28142/

me too!

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  Ananke  28 Mar 06 12:46PM Thread Closed

no words in the title, can't have more than one syllable, except for the parenthetical "johnny"

> > Can the title have more than one syllable?
>
> I mean the words in the title.

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  unknown  28 Mar 06 7:33PM Thread Closed

Thank you for the clarification, Ananke.

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  netskyIam  28 Mar 06 8:04PM Thread Closed

can't poet it for four days.
-a first draft why not?-



taught in school
before we spawned
we learned as roe
of carnal charms

as fish are fools
and golden rules
as dicks are tools
as cunts are holes
as men are moles
and babies, boles
on trunks of wood,
I would and could
go fish.

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  netskyIam  28 Mar 06 8:05PM Thread Closed

tooopid!  "golden"
what a jerky error.  will fix

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  netskyIam  28 Mar 06 8:05PM Thread Closed

DOUBLE STOOPID

blew his own cover.

arrrrrgh!  dead!  dead entry.

shoot me, someone

ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  netskyIam  28 Mar 06 8:06PM Thread Closed

ba-bies?

you must be dyslexic reid!

yam!

re: ONE NOTE SONG POETRY CONTEST  Ananke  28 Mar 06 8:22PM Thread Closed

ahahaha aww
poor reid

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