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POETRY CRITIQUES philosophile 6 Nov 05 11:48AM |
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Hi,
I am new here, please feel free to read my submissions, It would be great to read some criticisms, please!
Thank-you
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES FangzOfFire 6 Nov 05 3:43PM |
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Welcome to PC! You can get more critiques by commenting on other people's work than you will asking over the forum. =)
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES philosophile 6 Nov 05 4:34PM |
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THANKYOU FOR THE WELCOME AND INTRO FANGZOFIRE
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES bear 6 Nov 05 7:19PM |
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Welcome to PC!
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES shadowskiss 7 Nov 05 1:34AM |
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Welcome, as fangz said, the more you critique the more people will go off and critique your own work. And please, take it well, and ignore un thought out ones, if someone says something bad, and its thought out, they are only trying to help. :) I hope to see you around :)
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES unknown 7 Nov 05 7:16AM |
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... and remember to keep clicking the 'random poem' link. Some of my older stuff is really great. :)
have fun here and if, necessary ask Santa for a nice thick skin.
welcome!
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES philosophile 7 Nov 05 8:28AM |
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Hello shadowkiss - just read your piece about the ledzeppelin hooded boyfriend.
Sorry, cant remember the name of it! but I wrote a long critique for it which I hope you will appreciate. I have to disagree with Fangzofire tho, the blatant music decription works well I think. I think its good to have a sudden dose of reality, like an anchor or beacon in amongst the landsape of the poem. This is what its about!
Thank-you for in the welcome shdowkiss
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES unknown 7 Nov 05 9:10AM |
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What band were you in?
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES unknown 7 Nov 05 10:24AM |
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> What band were you in?
I was in Danny and the Deadheads ,who reached number 54 in the British charts in September 1973 with a choral and harmonium version of "Oh Lord I Lately Come To Thee",taken from THe Clergymen's classic album The Divine Light"
Boris Saul,the lead singer converted to the church in 1985 and is currently awaiting trial for molestation of old bibles.
Far out man
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re: POETRY CRITIQUES unknown 7 Nov 05 10:47AM |
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Okay? well done you.
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