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i love the dong  noodleman  27 Oct 05 10:20PM Thread Closed

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vietnamese_dong

re: i love the dong  noodleman  27 Oct 05 10:24PM Thread Closed

so i walk into this place
and i throw my dong
on the bar
and say
what can this get me
tonight? the bar maid

says that's a lot of dong
do you always carry so much?
i tell her i carry
as much dong
as i can fit in my pants

pocket comfortably
and the rest i just fold up and
put in my shoe.
nothing feels quite like
a big roll of fresh dong
in the palm of your hand

i tell her, and she agrees.

re: i love the dong  bear  27 Oct 05 10:32PM Thread Closed

you never fail to make me smile. ever. cheers.

re: i love the dong  noodleman  27 Oct 05 10:37PM Thread Closed

heres a nice picture of a multicolored dong bear. :)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:500000t.jpg

re: i love the dong  bear  27 Oct 05 10:41PM Thread Closed

haha that is a very nice dong, but i've seen prettier ;)

re: i love the dong  crepaway  27 Oct 05 10:59PM Thread Closed

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ding

re: i love the dong  unknown  28 Oct 05 1:36PM Thread Closed

:P

re: i love the dong  bettalpha  28 Oct 05 2:20PM Thread Closed

the use of pants made me smile. the poem split it.

re: i love the dong  unknown  28 Oct 05 2:23PM Thread Closed

always glad to share my dong with the right people.

-nm

re: i love the dong  OKcomputer  28 Oct 05 2:33PM Thread Closed

MY HEART IS MAKING JITTER SOUNDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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