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that summer you went to panay  gnormal  29 Apr 07 6:06PM Thread Closed

life is short.
i invite you to iloilo.

it's cheap and fun.
stay in my place
out of the sun.

re: that summer you went to panay  unknown  29 Apr 07 6:14PM Thread Closed

life is too short
to be alone

katouey
come here
and lick
my loins

re: that summer you went to panay  unknown  29 Apr 07 6:52PM Thread Closed

iloilo was fun
when i went.
we had spider legs.
roasted, you know.

then i learned
how to weave
boredom.

re: that summer you went to panay  unknown  29 Apr 07 8:09PM Thread Closed

i ha dalilo once;
too short for my
spider legs

i sunk over my head
in sunshine.

my my my, dalilo.
why why why, dalilo?

re: that summer you went to panay  hank  30 Apr 07 4:17PM Thread Closed

ready.

re: that summer you went to panay  varun  30 Apr 07 5:03PM Thread Closed

can i come?

re: that summer you went to panay  sir_I_clan  1 May 07 7:08AM Thread Closed

Me to .

re: that summer you went to panay  unknown  1 May 07 7:32AM Thread Closed

like yeah

http://poetry.tetto.org/read/40176/

re: that summer you went to panay  stout  1 May 07 9:45AM Thread Closed

and me

re: that summer you went to panay  unknown  1 May 07 8:11PM Thread Closed

Iloilo is nice. Kalibo is nice too. Borocay sucks. Alogopo is ok. Manila smells like a sewer.

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