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Thank god there are no MEN! here.  OKcomputer  8 Mar 07 6:42PM Post Reply

YOU'RE A BUNCH OF LITTLE GI'LS! LITTLE GI'LS!

DO YOU WANT ME TO PACIFY YOU WITH A LOLLY? A BISQUIT? BUTTER?

i can read each and every one of your minds. thats why i dont like the poems :() i already know them. heard them before. every time i read a poem i have deja vu.

OH WAIT. MAYBE I HAVE WRITTEN EVERY POEM IN EXISTENCE BEFORE IT WAS WRITTEN? IS THAT WHY THEY SEEM SO FAMILIAR?

I am God.

-God.

--god

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  unknown  8 Mar 07 6:55PM Post Reply

settle, settle,
i can remember my first acid trip
this will all pass

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  OKcomputer  8 Mar 07 6:59PM Post Reply

<3

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  netskyIam  8 Mar 07 7:41PM Post Reply

Feeling stranger by the minute!
Alice drained the...what was innit?
Absinthe? Custard? Lima beans?
Does she know that mixture means
cerebral crumblage!

Folks, the affliction is not funny.
Cerebral Crumblage breadcrumbs minds!
DO NOT EXPERIMENT with strange foods;
no ice cream peppered with MSG will do
good for you.


It won't!

OK, compute.

i like u

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  unknown  8 Mar 07 7:41PM Post Reply

pass
     passs
will all

p  a  s  s

remember the
trip to

settle

seattle

acid rain
falls

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  ShelbyS  8 Mar 07 7:55PM Post Reply

Ecclesiastes?

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  unknown  8 Mar 07 8:23PM Post Reply

> pass
>      passs
> will all
>
> p  a  s  s
>
> remember the
> trip to
>
> settle
>
> seattle
>
> acid rain
> falls

there was this girl, i think, from seattle, drove a funny car, took, too much scag,
i liked her a lot, but she melted, ran into a gutter, my friends, always go underground, it's ok computer, i will join them all, one day, at a time

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  unknown  8 Mar 07 8:27PM Post Reply

There was this girl
i think from Seattle
drove a funny car
took, too much scag
i liked her a lot
she melted, ran into a gutter
my friends always go, underground
it's ok computer
i will join them all
one day
at a time...


At least it looks like a poem now.

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  unknown  8 Mar 07 8:57PM Post Reply

<3

re: Thank god there are no MEN! here.  unknown  12 Mar 07 4:54AM Post Reply

thank fook for dat, save me the bother of trying

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