> i'll tell you what i think when i come across your poem. i'm not
> going there just because you asked me to. wait in line!
Amen to this.
To the OP:
Don't tell me what to do...how fucking self-obsessed and inconsiderate.
re: Rate my new writingsunknown 4 Feb 07 3:26AM
Yeah, all the above complaints are frump, is that a word? It is like at work, I agree to not do something because some asshole doesn't want it done, then when he turns his back, I do it. I critiqued your poem but I doubt you will thank me.