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To calm things down:  sailingpoet  2 Feb 07 3:18PM Post Reply

Here's something maybe to calm things down on this board,

Breathe
Imagine, just imagine...
I can't see you, but i feel you
My eyes are closed, and my head is tucked in,
You are in my breath

Inhale, exhale, you are like a seashell in the waves
No directions, but back and forth
Wishing that I'd never stop breathing

Harmony, harmony! Use the energy!
For "good" and for "ever"
Breathe in, breathe out, "can you see me now?"
Let go of that greed and be with yourself

Feel, but don't feel!
See like the blind!
Hear like the deaf!
Speak like the mute!

Let real you take places,
Let not real you take even more places.
"Pick and choose" is not the name of the game!
But your path is.

Now!... Was that your imagination?
Or was it just......
Pick and choose again
Path is free

re: To calm things down:  nightengale  2 Feb 07 3:20PM Post Reply

I highly doubt that's going to help.

re: To calm things down:  unknown  2 Feb 07 3:21PM Post Reply

why not i just read it's a pretty calm poem

re: To calm things down:  unknown  2 Feb 07 3:23PM Post Reply

orgy at 3pm at nightengale's place



attire - confidence

re: To calm things down:  sailingpoet  2 Feb 07 3:25PM Post Reply

you see it's working already
we're talking about an orgy party,
good work my friend
why make war?

re: To calm things down:  unknown  2 Feb 07 3:30PM Post Reply

And I lowly doubt it too

re: To calm things down:  unknown  2 Feb 07 3:58PM Post Reply

> you see it's working already
> we're talking about an orgy party,
> good work my friend
> why make war?

Why not, your futtocks are too close to the main spar. Loosen the marlin spikes of aggression, they work wonders in a dockside pub brawl. Heave to me hearty, before your keelhauled ungentle. Ahrr! what says the parrot; boatswain stop plucking my feathers...

re: To calm things down:  unknown  2 Feb 07 4:04PM Post Reply

dude,
take a deep breath before you do all that,
seems like a lot of work.

re: To calm things down:  Mor  2 Feb 07 4:15PM Post Reply

> dude,
> take a deep breath before you do all that,
> seems like a lot of work.

It is not all kippers and marmalade being a sailor, those sea gulls are indeed nasty bastards, just when you were enjoying your cup of Horlicks and brandy, they add the sweetener.

re: To calm things down:  sailingpoet  2 Feb 07 4:21PM Post Reply

wow, seems like we have seasoned sailors over here,
cool, what do you know about sailing?

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