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re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  Esoteric  2 Feb 07 3:49PM Post Reply

'blissfully ignorant' is over used, as is anything along the lines of 'dancing flames'

love isn't overused, its just been phrased the same way for the past 20983746 years - there are still aspects to be explored.

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  unknown  2 Feb 07 3:53PM Post Reply

silent [insert some sort of noise]

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  unknown  2 Feb 07 3:55PM Post Reply

>>
> love isn't overused, its just been phrased the same way for the past
> 20983746 years - there are still aspects to be explored.

not true.

it used to be

ugh.

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  Mor  2 Feb 07 4:08PM Post Reply

I think that the term carpobalsamum is grossly overused, those nuts from the Balsamodendron Gileadense have a very  hard time keeping up with the demand for volatile oil,  especially that of an aromatic nature.

Where would our brothels be with out it? Serious question indeed.

Mor.

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  Esoteric  2 Feb 07 4:48PM Post Reply

you can't say its not true - there are some mor intense and often illegal forms of love hovering around.

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  nightengale  2 Feb 07 5:39PM Post Reply

> silent [insert some sort of noise]

yep. pretty much. one that comes to mind: silent scream

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  unknown  2 Feb 07 11:15PM Post Reply

http://poetry.tetto.org/read/37727/

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  unknown  3 Feb 07 8:51AM Post Reply

All words are usable in poems... and will work depending on how you use them.

re: Words that probably won't work in most poems.  unknown  3 Feb 07 9:02AM Post Reply

> All words are usable in poems... and will work depending on how you
> use them.

All words
in poems are
depending...

usable
use them
and

how
you will
work on.

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