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re: I'm new here  bologna  2 Feb 07 10:28AM Post Reply

no one gives a shit.

re: I'm new here  unknown  3 Feb 07 12:19AM Post Reply

> Hello everyone. I am a new poet here and I ask that you all bear with
> me because alot of this poetry is very new to me. I usually read
> spiritual poems, and am not used to alot of the poetry here. I've
> only read three poems, and I'm already very pleased with what I've
> read.

One, everyone, must wonder what three poems those were that you read here. It would be very difficult to read three poems in a row here without becoming a little sick. I almost mentioned your key word in your poem, but it might make me heave. Are you the grandmother from the movie Christmas Story? I'll give you a quarter to rub my bunion. Good grief.

re: I'm new here , no just my corn is new  nightengale  3 Feb 07 12:43AM Post Reply

Dearest NewComer,

Welcome to PC, a place where criticism is always negitive. I do have to say that there are wonderful poets on here, but everyone is so miserable that they want everyone else to miserable as well. If you want to become a better poet, stay here and listen to good constructive criticism where it can be found. If you just want others to tell you what works and what doesn't and how your poetry has impacted them, I can recommend another poetry site.

Good luck.
julia :)

ps- the Messageboard is just a bunch of skeptics who like to argue and commit the fallacy of ad hominem instead of really dealing with the issue being discussed. Take part and enjoy.

re: I'm new here , no just my corn is new  unknown  3 Feb 07 1:01AM Post Reply

> Dearest NewComer,
>
> Welcome to PC, a place where criticism is always negitive. I do have
> to say that there are wonderful poets on here, but everyone is so
> miserable that they want everyone else to miserable as well. If you
> want to become a better poet, stay here and listen to good
> constructive criticism where it can be found. If you just want others
> to tell you what works and what doesn't and how your poetry has
> impacted them, I can recommend another poetry site.
>
> Good luck.
> julia :)
>
> ps- the Messageboard is just a bunch of skeptics who like to argue and
> commit the fallacy of ad hominem instead of really dealing with the
> issue being discussed. Take part and enjoy.

Not even you, miss nightingale, can say with a word of truth that you like her poem. Tell me that you like it, I dare you.

re: I'm new here , no just my corn is new  nightengale  3 Feb 07 1:09AM Post Reply

Wait, what's the question? Do I like her poetry? I never read it.

re: I'm new here  unknown  5 Feb 07 7:24PM Post Reply

> Hello everyone. I am a new poet here and I ask that you all bear with
> me because alot of this poetry is very new to me. I usually read
> spiritual poems, and am not used to alot of the poetry here. I've
> only read three poems, and I'm already very pleased with what I've
> read.

Good spiritual people are put down on this stupid site. Most of the users are imature teenagers. Some are rebelious faggots. All are rotten people.

re: I'm new here  unknown  6 Feb 07 6:23PM Post Reply

All PC users are assholes.

re: I'm new here  unknown  6 Feb 07 6:25PM Post Reply

whoah horsey. Rein yourself in.

re: I'm new here  pl_rose03  6 Feb 07 7:03PM Post Reply

im new here too. so welcome to us both. :o)

re: I'm new here  unknown  6 Feb 07 7:28PM Post Reply

Let's have sex together.

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