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re: i'm a genius  ducktape  29 Jan 07 9:57PM Post Reply

eheh.  (;

re: i'm a genius  unknown  30 Jan 07 4:56AM Post Reply

This is really stupid mike .

> i'm a genius and whatever i write is pure and the truth and can't be
> edited cause it's from truth and nobody can tell me how to write, and
> no poem is good or bad!!! -- do you like my poem?

re: i'm a genius  mikebauer  30 Jan 07 6:01AM Post Reply

yes, but it's the motto of so many here. and you can hear them say this if you critique their poem in a way that they don't like. and, yet, they want you to approve of their work so very much.

> This is really stupid mike .
>
> > i'm a genius and whatever i write is pure and the truth and can't
> be
> > edited cause it's from truth and nobody can tell me how to write,
> and
> > no poem is good or bad!!! -- do you like my poem?

re: i'm a genius  unknown  30 Jan 07 6:17AM Post Reply

The truth is they just aren't old enough to know any better, age - a thing that man can not buy, the wisdom of years, and the exuberant innocence of youth, a potent concoction it would indeed be.


> yes, but it's the motto of so many here. and you can hear them say
> this if you critique their poem in a way that they don't like. and,
> yet, they want you to approve of their work so very much.
>
> > This is really stupid mike .
> >
> > > i'm a genius and whatever i write is pure and the truth and
> can't
> > be
> > > edited cause it's from truth and nobody can tell me how to write,
> > and
> > > no poem is good or bad!!! -- do you like my poem?

re: i'm a genius  bettalpha  30 Jan 07 8:33AM Post Reply

i am a pretend genius.

re: i'm a genius  mikebauer  30 Jan 07 8:39AM Post Reply

some of them are over 40.


> The truth is they just aren't old enough to know any better, age - a
> thing that man can not buy, the wisdom of years, and the exuberant
> innocence of youth, a potent concoction it would indeed be.
>
>
> > yes, but it's the motto of so many here. and you can hear them say
> > this if you critique their poem in a way that they don't like. and,
> > yet, they want you to approve of their work so very much.
> >
> > > This is really stupid mike .
> > >
> > > > i'm a genius and whatever i write is pure and the truth and
> > can't
> > > be
> > > > edited cause it's from truth and nobody can tell me how to
> write,
> > > and
> > > > no poem is good or bad!!! -- do you like my poem?

re: i'm a genius  bettalpha  30 Jan 07 8:51AM Post Reply

i am 9 days old.

re: i'm a genius  chuckles  30 Jan 07 9:08AM Post Reply

> i am 9 days old.

are you hot?

are you cold?

are you in the pot?

re: i'm a genius  unknown  30 Jan 07 9:10AM Post Reply

Trust me she's potty .

re: i'm a genius  bettalpha  30 Jan 07 9:26AM Post Reply

i smell of snowdrops. i am 9 days old. i am a pretend genius.

this is all true. no metaphors. no fantasies. no panties.

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