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love is a trick
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slowly, slowly...
 1
hearts are yearning,
 2
wants and needs merge,
 3
confusion takes over,
 4
hearts beating franticly.
 5
fear, excitement...
 6
a hammering from inside,
 7
it will never come.
 8
he will never come.
 9
passions lose,
 10
hearts exposed,
 11
eyes wide open,
 12
wanting you.
 13
a beating of life,
 14
torment, torture.
 15
a wait never to end.
 16
realisation;
 17
pounding loudly,
 18
betraying the hearts.
 19
hurt - followed by tears.
 20
the pain never leaves,
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the hearts wait,
 22
broken,
 23
scarred.
 24
needing the love,
 25
the gentle touch,
 26
to be whole.
 27
maybe like before -
 28
hopes and dreams.
 29
corners of the mind empty,
 30
one sole thought.
 31
him.
 32
i'm scared...
 33

06/28/07

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