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Definitions will spawn in a new window (Wordnet):

one day at dusk
etcetera

Nobody would believe this sky
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if it was part of a painting and
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I’m stuck here between
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realism and your world.
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Not that it’s any kind of trap.
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But it certainly doesn’t feel
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like any kind of freedom.
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It makes me wonder
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where it is in our bodies
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that you and I find each other.
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03/07/07

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