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out from under an umbrella
Kodicas

in a dream i met a girl
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who swam in sentiments
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she poured idyllic notions into the cool night air-
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and kneeded my rigid consciousness
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we glided down gleaming streets
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illuminated by lamp posts and love
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she endowed me with the audacity to abide the day
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and seize the moments that had always slipped away
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layer by layer, exhausted habits were peeled away
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stripped away was my artificial shade
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we let the rain wash away my doubt
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and from under my umbrella
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i eventually ventured out
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02/26/07

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