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Ian darling,
unknown

i grew up spoiled.
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i replaced those pesky feelings
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with the items i would
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inevitably receive (everydayallday).
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& when YOU walk out
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that rusty door
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(which i hate but
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not quite enough to fix it)
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it squeaks and squeals
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like my inner child, who
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has a tantrum when
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she can't get what she wants.
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02/23/07

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