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Vitamin Wean
mints

My love for Wean
 1
a merciless noose
 2
The presence of Wean
 3
is my nourishment
 4
Oblivion may bear
 5
its wretched course
 6
But these concrete walls
 7
will never crumble
 8
 
Every meter of my bowels
 9
belongs to Wean
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Wean, weeping once
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in shameless honesty
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every stroke of my inky quill
 13
seeks your daunting melody
 14
Spare me of your desertion
 15
My emptied shadows fall into your well
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02/18/07

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