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Fantasies On The Circle
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Oh! To find that storybook love!
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Our eyes meet and,
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in my mind,
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we are away and in love,
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made to wander aimlessly
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through enchanted forests,
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and hold one another's hand,
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and fight off evil with a bat of our eyelashes.
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If only you would draw sword
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and defend me.
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I could stand
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and cover my mouth,
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gasp,
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and cheer when you win.
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Fairies would come at night
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and wreak havoc with our days.
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We would spend endless hours
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being deliriously confused
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and gently sad,
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before we find one another again,
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in a scene from your childhood dreams,
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or mine.
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When you are gone,
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the horses and my protection with you,
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you will write longhand letters
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in sloping pens,
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reciting the greatest poets,
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lamenting the loss of me,
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describing love in one hundred ways
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I've never heard before.
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We will be reunited,
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once four seasons have made your eyes
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a shade darker,
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and mine a shade sadder,
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but the banquet will give us fire
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and we'll dance and laugh our way
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to a happy ending.
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But alas,
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all this is not to be,
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because Liverpool Street is your stop
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and mine is Farringdon.
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You get off, and I look through the window,
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wishing I had the courage to wink.
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02/18/07

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