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Phone sex with a philosopher
unknown

HI sexy how are you? My name
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is xAnAx. I am 22, single, and lonely.
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I am so bored tonite. How about
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you? People like me
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coz I am slender, 35-32-33 and
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not shy. Tell me honey tell me
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about you?
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i i  I  I
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A dangerous symbol, a coda
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suggesting a consistent and
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unified sense of self.
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A visual nucleus legislating organic
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natures. Written as if there might be
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equivalence and therefore no
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qualitative differences. Ultimately
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a figure of speech, an abbreviation
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of life, a cheap summation and therefore
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a lie.  Lacking plurality. Sometimes reflecting
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body or mind or both. a=b=c=I.
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sometimes shrinking to a wart,
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penis, a secret, cancer or lie.
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An instant resume of an inheritance of
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traits of which you have no control
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over but are held accountable.
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Devalued currency. Easily
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divided and misrepresented.
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What you wish you can be and
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what you can never attain.
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A stubborn melody. Zip file.
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A side effect of monotheism/democracy.
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Mirage or ghost. A therapeutic misnomer.
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Myth and polymer.
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A fading tattoo.
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Hello?
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02/18/07

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