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To b vulnerable

I am a Man
and I am vulnerable.
I'm a daredevil,
an evil knievel
from a different dimension
ready to feel whatever
I may feel.
Call me a moron
a sissy,
a Fag,
an annoying turd.
but one thing I am not,
I am not a coward.
I am not afraid to risk
what there is to risk
to get a shot of freedom.
utopia waiting for me in the sun.
Through high hells and waters,
whatever may come,
lord let my weakness
and vulnerability guide me.


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