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To b vulnerable
CheBourdain7

I am a Man
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and I am vulnerable.
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I'm a daredevil,
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an evil knievel
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from a different dimension
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ready to feel whatever
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I may feel.
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Call me a moron
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a sissy,
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a Fag,
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an annoying turd.
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but one thing I am not,
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I am not a coward.
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I am not afraid to risk
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what there is to risk
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to get a shot of freedom.
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Freedom,
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utopia waiting for me in the sun.
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Through high hells and waters,
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whatever may come,
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lord let my weakness
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and vulnerability guide me.
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02/05/07

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