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Ive been overcome by my desire,
And I've lost my self control.
I feel beyond compelled for
The chance for one more kiss.
You are such a rare beauty.
You are my earthly goddess
If I kissed you one more time,
Would you tell me how you feel?
Would you tell me you love me again?
Im addicted to your love,
Im intoxicated by your presence.
My body screams for your touch,
And my heart screams for yours.
I remember the passion we shared,
And how you felt beneath my fingertips.
I want to to be inside of you again,
I have no escape from these feelings.
Im lying all alone and restless,
Unable to lose the image of you.
Im sleepless, unable to focus on
Anything but being with you.
I want your sweet surrender
I want to be closer to you.
Whenever I'm with you
You make me feel I'm whole.
I will always love you


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