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puppy love
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I'll get butterflies when i see him,
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he'll make me smile for hours.
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He'll hold me when im cold
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or suprize me with some flowers.
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Every song will be our song,
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we'll dance and laugh all day.
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He'll whisper sweetly in my ear,
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We'll kiss before he wals away.
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Ill jump into his arms,
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he'll look into my heart.
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Thats what kind of love i want,
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the kind that cannot part.
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02/04/07

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