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Smudged with color
Stellaella

You were a blur that day,
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smudged with colors of jealousy and love.
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We could have shut down that bar,
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instead we drank one beer.
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You always choose to say what you mean,
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but not what you want
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because you think that would be mean.
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I didn't need you to walk me home,
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I enjoyed the slightly painful
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but consistent
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beating of wind against my ears
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02/01/07

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