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My poo.
sisotowbel

'How are you?'
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That's all I said,
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it seems to have caused some confusion,
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as if I uttered an illicit line,
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a portion of profoundly impenetrable prose,
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a paradoxical poo in your sparkly pure thought stream.
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Now you, you're back in your corner,
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by the frosted window
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and the warmest radiator.
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These words with which I inadvertently raped you
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are filtering through your fingers -
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my poo on your paper.
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01/29/07

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