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Glass Enclosure
JoelJosol

A decommissioned body
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is enclosed
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in glass.
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Friends examine
 4
how close the resemblance
 5
of was to is,
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comparing notes,
 7
and pointing fingers
 8
to petty discrepancies,
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as if it were
 10
a document examined
 11
for fidelity.
 12
 
Visitors
 13
queue up to see
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the glass enclosure,
 15
to check how worn out the life
 16
displayed. Perhaps the signs
 17
will be self-explanatory.
 18
 
Around it,
 19
dissonant voices
 20
mingle with the yellow light
 21
cast on its surface,
 22
where both noise and silence
 23
kiss.
 24
 
The layers of wisdom-
 25
the thin white hair,
 26
the wrinkles in the forehead,
 27
the sealed lips-
 28
are like a sequoia tree
 29
and its concentric circles
 30
 
while it lay fallen, cut in two
 31
just like him
 32
unable to sit, nor rise
 33
until Death gave the coup de grace
 34
in his sleep.
 35
 
The visitors find their way
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along the seats
 37
before his enclosure-
 38
relatives up front,
 39
close friends next,
 40
then everybody else
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clustering around
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the coffee, juice,
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biscuits, bread, and nuts-
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good reasons to shut up
 45
until it's time for one more look
 46
to say good-bye
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after which things change abruptly
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when loneliness wakes up
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and the dead disappears
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from view
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from their lives
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from what still matters.
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01/26/07

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