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Velvet Man-Trap
themolly

I could talk in riddles,
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see if you get my jokes.
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Chat my savant to your idiot
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and smoke up all the dope.
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Tiptoe around intentions
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instead of jacking the vein.
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View from many cross-sections
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a pose you can't maintain.
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My question is this,
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how do I make you nervous?
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You're the one who called to me,
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asked for me,
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arranged for me,
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and this.
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You've planted a flower with claws.
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Luring scent
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colored velvet petals
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but sharp;
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born to suck
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and infect your heart.
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03/30/05

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