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Don’t squeeze me into your mold (a villanelle)
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I’m not yet old
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although I’m turning grey,
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I act quite young, I’m told.
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I do not a chore,
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but I love to play…
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doing work is such a bore.
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I’m not yet old,
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but I’ve learned to adore
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friendship more than the rarest gold.
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I still buy from the ice cream man.
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My laundry, I never fold.
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I’m Gerry Garcia's # 1 fan.
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My soul, I’m proud, I have not sold.
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Everything I own fits in my van—
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yet, with the times, I’ve rolled.
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I suppose that I could be cajoled,
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but chances are slim on that.
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I’m not yet old.
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I act quite young, I’m told.
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>>>Alternate title:  “burned-out hippie”
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01/20/05

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