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I wanna be etherized on your table.
Rynne

I wanna be etherized on your table.
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It's easy to cover it with pretty words
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and obscure the rawness with
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a well placed
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metaphor, but
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the truth is blunt:
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I want you.
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Don't care if it's love or not,
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I just want to nip your
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skin
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and pin
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you down beneath me.
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Sometimes you drive me
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crazy, and I think
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you know it.
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Look at me now with that
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teasing glance and quirked
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smile,
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but you're gonna pay
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the price.
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In the end,
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you don't really mind.
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12/09/04

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